Kneel Before Me - Ch. 8

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the pacing and storytelling are quite all over the place imo but well, it just started so..

thank you for the update!
 
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I don’t know what to expect, or what is happening, but I’m very intrigued. Thank you for translating! ❤️
 
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thanks for all of the chapters! it's pretty good and has a different plot, i liked it.
 
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Im sorry before, i read both raw and your translation, i just want to make suggestions so that your translation could be better.
The first sentence, rather than "he said" i think it's "i said" that would correlate with her previous conversation with the man in the inn before.
 
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Damm this is the last one even though i was geting super into this one daaaamit
 
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This is so dragging lmao. I feel like there are too many unnecessary scenes and too many that could've been added. I'm dropping this.
 

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