Koi ni Koisuru Yukari-chan - Vol. 1 Ch. 8 - Slumber Party
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poor yukari, and seeing how things go in moto...
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@Shota5749 Who the hell would want to share this? Did you really grayscale color images? And "We will be having an overnight stay"?
Seriously? You even used slumber party in the title. Get a proofreader. The correct way to go about it is to use the word "sleepover", since she's talking about it being less of a slumber party and more of a study session.
All of this dialogue is so stilted and awful.
And what the hell is the "I played. I played." part? The fuck?
I feel like AXAY is probably ESL MTL and Leah is ESL. This is some lukewarm trash. The hell is soolee even checking? Just the typesetting? Oh wait, you just grabbed these raws off some shitty aggregate like LH or something, didn't you? Riddled with artifacting. Or did you screenshot these? Eugh.
Seriously? You even used slumber party in the title. Get a proofreader. The correct way to go about it is to use the word "sleepover", since she's talking about it being less of a slumber party and more of a study session.
All of this dialogue is so stilted and awful.
And what the hell is the "I played. I played." part? The fuck?
I feel like AXAY is probably ESL MTL and Leah is ESL. This is some lukewarm trash. The hell is soolee even checking? Just the typesetting? Oh wait, you just grabbed these raws off some shitty aggregate like LH or something, didn't you? Riddled with artifacting. Or did you screenshot these? Eugh.
