Koisuru (Otome) no Tsukurikata - Ch. 92

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small tip, use hyphenation24 for places to linebreak
pg 4: setlled -> settled
pg 6: yoi-(line break)-machi (cuz that's how it is on pg 11 and the other line-broken words)
pg 9: your first bubble has 4 dots, ... mhm -> ...mhm, realtionship -> relationship
pg 15: thinnk -> think

you might want to figure something out with the tildes (~)
 
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I have to say, Yoimachi was right. Considering how hard it was to come out of the closet in Japan, it definitely was not easy for both Hiura and Midou to finally end up with their decisions.

And looks like Gin is finally getting the route he has been working hard for. Let's do this.
 
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They're so cute. I love them four :hearts:

Now Prez gonna ask to see them fucking to confirm they're dating. Making sure Hiura gets a good old injection of love right into his tight bussy while splurting.

Thanks for the TL
When Hiura said "I'm prepared to take whatever punishment I deserve...!" I automatically thought of you. And Yomaichi is the Photography Club president, so she might not only ask to see them, but to document the deed.
 
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Now Prez gonna ask to see them fucking to confirm they're dating. Making sure Hiura gets a good old injection of love right into his tight bussy while splurting.

Thanks for the TL
Why do people have to sexualize and fetishize everything.
 

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