Okay, this was genuinely interesting but, as many have said in the comments, it could be better.
To give the doujin the benefit of the doubt, I’m going to assume that the rude comments towards Komi were from her perspective and they were actually gushing over her. But the art’s a bit odd and it’s too short.
Far from terrible, but certainly no masterpiece. 7.5/10 (giving an 8)