Kono Mama ja Dame Mitai desu - Oneshot

[MangaDex]

 

[OrangeAbundis]

i liked it, although it was a little bland for one thing, maybe the time traveller who slipped on the banana couldve been the male rival #1 descendent wanting to have his ancestor be the heroine or whatever, the MC was really bland as well, i feel like his going for nothing life didnt suit his character for this type of story, maybe if he were struck with bad luck for life i wouldve enjoyed him but he's too relateable maybe and especially to myself so ill be pretty biased about him. the heroine was just female body one nothing know about her just she pretty, the rival is just dick #1 and riajuu for life, the descendent was probably my favorite, he seemed cool and the author kind wanted to make him as the cool quiet type thats secretly an S maybe thats a generic setting for a support character but he was likeable

the story i feel could be a little bad considering how time travel works. it has plenty it could venture into like i said about the rivals descendant interfering with the MC as well. i like it tho something id like to see progress

 

[sneezebag]

Whole story a bruh moment but it's not so bad