Koori no Reijou no Tokashi kata - Vol. 1 Ch. 5 - Sports Competition

[zerio]

The chapter is a bit confusing there but I think they're showing 2 different games, Hinami's game (which was the one that had 5 seconds left) and Himuro's game (which had 10 minutes left). You can kinda tell because Chiaki says that he will speak with Hinami while the other game is still going on. I'm guessing they played against each other in the finals or something.

After seeing the raw and reading ch 6, I think this are the same game.
When MC grabbed a drink and met Himuro, on pg 24, she said it will be hard to win. Then MC said "really? You can still catch up".
And well, while not explicit, ch 5 already shows Hinami vs Himuro.

So, I think the 5 seconds left is for first half of the game. Then the 10 mins is for the second half, which takes place after a break. And the score after first half is 21 vs 28.
I mean, it doesn't make sense to insert some random game here.

Also as matlai17 said, those kanji is for group/class. https://jisho.org/search/組
That means all our casts are freshmen/first years.
As seen in ch 2, MC and Chiaki are year 1 class 1.
Hinami is year 1 class 2.
Himuro is year 1 class 3.

So, when the people argued which class to win, they only said.
"well I guess this is class 2's win"
"nah, there's still Himuro's three pointers, so class 3 still have a chance"

I wonder if it is a mistranslation. The term used on the scoreboard and in what they are saying is 3組 and 2組 which, as far as I can tell, just means "group" so 3rd and 2nd group/team is what I am guessing.

 

[zerio]

Also, some corrections.

Pg 4: the perfect health stuff --> "even in your perfect condition, I'm worried (if you cook). You want to do it while your hand is injured?"

Pg 11: bold --> sharp

 

[Yuvix]

After seeing the raw and reading ch 6, I think this are the same game.
When MC grabbed a drink and met Himuro, on pg 24, she said it will be hard to win. Then MC said "really? You can still catch up".
And well, while not explicit, ch 5 already shows Hinami vs Himuro.

So, I think the 5 seconds left is for first half of the game. Then the 10 mins is for the second half, which takes place after a break. And the score after first half is 21 vs 28.
I mean, it doesn't make sense to insert some random game here.

Also as matlai17 said, those kanji is for group/class. https://jisho.org/search/組
That means all our casts are freshmen/first years.
As seen in ch 2, MC and Chiaki are year 1 class 1.
Hinami is year 1 class 2.
Himuro is year 1 class 3.

So, when the people argued which class to win, they only said.
"well I guess this is class 2's win"
"nah, there's still Himuro's three pointers, so class 3 still have a chance"

I stand corrected. Thank you for the explanation!

 

[Yuvix]

Also, some corrections.

Pg 4: the perfect health stuff --> "even in your perfect condition, I'm worried (if you cook). You want to do it while your hand is injured?"

Pg 11: bold --> sharp

I didn’t want to use “sharp” twice but i’ll gladly change it. Will have to be tomorrow tho (on my time zone at least)

 

[zerio]

I didn’t want to use “sharp” twice but i’ll gladly change it. Will have to be tomorrow tho (on my time zone at least)

Understandable. But I don't think bold is a synonym for sharp. Maybe perceptive?

Ah okay, I will wait tomorrow for the class 2 class 3 stuff as well.

 

[Yuvix]

@zerio Everything should be fixed, lmk if you find anything else that's wrong or doesn't make sense!
I'm still very new to this whole "translating manga" thing so bear with me.

 

[zerio]

@zerio Everything should be fixed, lmk if you find anything else that's wrong or doesn't make sense!
I'm still very new to this whole "translating manga" thing so bear with me.

Thanks!
I have tried my hand on scanlation before, so I know how challenging it is.
So, I really appreciate your work and persistence!