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Ada Member Joined Apr 10, 2018 Messages 268 Feb 27, 2020 #2 Pretty fun, hopefully it will continue like this!
torikun Double-page supporter Joined Dec 27, 2018 Messages 471 Feb 27, 2020 #3 The art is good and the jokes are there, but the composition of the panels don't lend itself to the narrative/punchlines. I could see it being way funnier if he fixes the presentation. Boi needs a better editor
The art is good and the jokes are there, but the composition of the panels don't lend itself to the narrative/punchlines. I could see it being way funnier if he fixes the presentation. Boi needs a better editor
eansa Dex-chan lover Joined Apr 6, 2020 Messages 127 Sep 26, 2020 #6 This is looks great and promising
limabeanC Fed-Kun's army Joined Jun 25, 2020 Messages 246 Jan 10, 2021 #8 It’s great! Hope to see more of it!
Nightingale6963 Joined Sep 12, 2020 Messages 87 Mar 16, 2021 #9 We meed more asap, this is beyond gold from these two chapters alone. I rank it platinum.
gundulgondrong Dex-chan lover Joined Dec 23, 2019 Messages 1,263 Jul 3, 2024 #11 this is top quality art! expressive, easy to tell, fits the story!