Koushaku Chakunan Koushoku Monogatari ~Isekai Harem Eiyuu Senki~

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Art is good, but plot is lacky.
As far as smut goes, this is good for a quick afternoon escape. Author tries too hard to make the protagonist "powerful" but end up creating an small d__k incel energy character.

The protagonist has wealth, power, renown, and a great body. But somehow, the only method he chooses to have sex with women is coercion. Not even, "i take you forcibly because I am stronger" kind of coercion, but through shameless black-mailing. Even if the series is taken as a r_pe fantasy, the protagonist radiates too much small-d__k and incel energy to be suitable. The protagonist thinks he is dominating his women, but he is not.
 
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I don't plan to write an essay analyzing why this mc is an asshole
cuz hes just an asshole
and a pretty lowlife one

thats it, if u're not into it first 2 chapters, its fine if u drop it, u aint missing much
 
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A: "Okay, so here's my pitch, an erotic story in which the MC has a lot of sex. Sure there's rape and coercion, but either way, MC fucks. A LOT"
B: "Uh, okay... the non-consensual stuff is going to turn a bunch of people off of it but I suppose we can still draw in the horny/degen demographic with all the sex scen-"
A: "but all the sex happens off-screen!" :meguu:

I would love to have the author/editor/publisher sit down and explain this thought process to me.
 

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