I respect your effort and time spent doing this but your translation feels off.
I read the spanish scans and your translation of it is kinda stiff , ogro = scary woman ? Or when she feels like her chest is tightening saying out loud she has no special relationship with kagami , "it doesn't feel good" is a lil off.
I really like this manga so I still hope someone who can translate the raws to eng will pick this up though Iam glad you brought back attention to it