Kuchibeta Shokudou - Ch. 57 - Refill

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It's plenty readable! Only feedback is already mentioned above.

Thanks for picking this up!
 
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When there's only one slice of pizza left and nobody has the courage to take it lol
 
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Thanks for picking it up!

It is easy to read, but yeah as the first comment mentioned, the upside-down question marks are the only thing I would point out
 
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Like others have said: this is very readable. Besides a few typos (e.g., lower case "i" shows up a lot when it should be capitalized for first-person pronoun) and some phrasing that's a little bit stiff or awkward, you did a really good job for an ESL speaker! Your redrawing looks really clean, too!

Thank you for the translation!
 

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