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I'm not sure what to feel with the aladin-looking guy as our final boss in this tournament.
He kinda just spawned out of nowhere and wants to pick a fight with the protagonist just because the author demands it.
 
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Alright, this is gonna be hype. I can’t wait to see them throw down. Hopefully Lythe gets either fuckloads of spell skills from him OR gets whatever is making the sage OP (parallel processing or something? Or super intellect?)

I’m not sure how he’ll close the distance but getting one of two punches in one be nice.

Thanks for the translation!
 
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If you notice something strange just tell me I'll try to fix it as fast as I could.🙇‍♂️
There are some small grammatical errors that it's just too late at night for me to think to bother with.




The major problems are those that are simply inherent in any series that chooses to have a tournament arc, and thus out of your control to fix.
 
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Hopefully the battle goes on for about 2 chapters at most instead of dragging it out to 8-10 chapters like some manga authors love to do. A short decisive battle with the least amount of upsets and power changes possible would be nice for once.
 
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If you notice something strange just tell me I'll try to fix it as fast as I could.🙇‍♂️
You're breaking words at the wrong places for new lines. For example, use “job-less”, not “jobl-ess”. Since the Greco-Roman writing system uses an alphabet, rather than a syllabary, the breaks should not come between just any two characters. References such as The American Heritage Dictionary will show you where to place breaks.

For a counter-factual, use the modal auxiliary “had”, not “have”. “If I'd become a Holy Knight”, not “If I've become a Holy Knight”.

While using a comma is acceptable for joining what would otherwise be two closely related short sentences, a semicolon is the better choice, especially when commas are already used in one of those sentences. “It's fine; the truth is, I wanted to touch you more.”

Always offset a vocative with punctuation. “by the way, Sarah,”. “Geez, Lythe, you're too humble!” (Or “Geez, Lythe! You're too humble!” or “Geez! Lythe, you're too humble!”)

The form “finals” is simply plural. “The finals are about to start!” English can be a little bit inconsistent, but the cases in which a plural noun must take a singular verb are few.

When “okay” is clipped, use an apostrophe. “ 'kay ”
 
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You're breaking words at the wrong places for new lines. For example, use “job-less”, not “jobl-ess”. Since the Greco-Roman writing system uses an alphabet, rather than a syllabary, the breaks should not come between just any two characters. References such as The American Heritage Dictionary will show you where to place breaks.

For a counter-factual, use the modal auxiliary “had”, not “have”. “If I'd become a Holy Knight”, not “If I've become a Holy Knight”.

While using a comma is acceptable for joining what would otherwise be two closely related short sentences, a semicolon is the better choice, especially when commas are already used in one of those sentences. “It's fine; the truth is, I wanted to touch you more.”

Always offset a vocative with punctuation. “by the way, Sarah,”. “Geez, Lythe, you're too humble!” (Or “Geez, Lythe! You're too humble!” or “Geez! Lythe, you're too humble!”)

The form “finals” is simply plural. “The finals are about to start!” English can be a little bit inconsistent, but the cases in which a plural noun must take a singular verb are few.

When “okay” is clipped, use an apostrophe. “ 'kay ”
I'll make sure to always remember these🙇‍♂️
 
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What a Doormat, He has COPYING Skill which is OP, But he barely Copying all the skill he encounter, not even he copying Princess skill Appraisal which is Core of Copying skill,
and this Tournament arc Rivaling Namex Arc which is unhelpful
and as always thank Jailbird Scans for your effort
 
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What a Doormat, He has COPYING Skill which is OP, But he barely Copying all the skill he encounter, not even he copying Princess skill Appraisal which is Core of Copying skill,
and this Tournament arc Rivaling Namex Arc which is unhelpful
and as always thank Jailbird Scans for your effort
Can @asphyxiav2 fix doormat ML’s?
 
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Princess should've given him a fistbump to encourage him and give him her skill while she's at it. But hey, a lap pillow is a good enough reward.
 
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Princess should've given him a fistbump to encourage him and give him her skill while she's at it. But hey, a lap pillow is a good enough reward.
ah, fistbump, I entirely overlooked that as a peaceful way of doing it. I was wondering if there was a safe way for him to strike the princess and not hurt her or be noticeable and all I thought of was a good slap on the ass.
 
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ah, fistbump, I entirely overlooked that as a peaceful way of doing it. I was wondering if there was a safe way for him to strike the princess and not hurt her or be noticeable and all I thought of was a good slap on the ass.
The author is at least aware that it is a method, since a few of the extra omake bits that are drawn at the end of some of the chapters does show him just randomly fist bumping citizens and getting random skills like Cooking. And it's also how he got the skills off his childhood friend too.

But it also means we're unlikely to see it actually happen in the story because the MC is actively avoiding taking any skills outside of a combat setting, since the only time he did a non-aggressive fist touch was when he was fooled into it by his childhood friend. The guy knows he can passively non-aggressively take copies of people's skills, but actively chooses to not pursue it outside of desperate combat scenarios. Not even as a greeting pre-combat, only during combat does he try to actually get the skills.

So due to that, it is likely that he will never copy the princess's skills or the king's OP skills either, unless he is tricked by them to take their skills. Or some convoluted circumstances makes him accidentally touch them with the back of his knuckle as he collapses or gets thrown around or something.
 

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