There are some small grammatical errors that it's just too late at night for me to think to bother with.If you notice something strange just tell me I'll try to fix it as fast as I could.🙇♂️
Oh, Author-san could still have a tournament arc yet not take more than one chapter for each match.The major problems are those that are simply inherent in any series that chooses to have a tournament arc, and thus out of your control to fix.
You're breaking words at the wrong places for new lines. For example, use “job-less”, not “jobl-ess”. Since the Greco-Roman writing system uses an alphabet, rather than a syllabary, the breaks should not come between just any two characters. References such as The American Heritage Dictionary will show you where to place breaks.If you notice something strange just tell me I'll try to fix it as fast as I could.🙇♂️
I'll make sure to always remember these🙇♂️You're breaking words at the wrong places for new lines. For example, use “job-less”, not “jobl-ess”. Since the Greco-Roman writing system uses an alphabet, rather than a syllabary, the breaks should not come between just any two characters. References such as The American Heritage Dictionary will show you where to place breaks.
For a counter-factual, use the modal auxiliary “had”, not “have”. “If I'd become a Holy Knight”, not “If I've become a Holy Knight”.
While using a comma is acceptable for joining what would otherwise be two closely related short sentences, a semicolon is the better choice, especially when commas are already used in one of those sentences. “It's fine; the truth is, I wanted to touch you more.”
Always offset a vocative with punctuation. “by the way, Sarah,”. “Geez, Lythe, you're too humble!” (Or “Geez, Lythe! You're too humble!” or “Geez! Lythe, you're too humble!”)
The form “finals” is simply plural. “The finals are about to start!” English can be a little bit inconsistent, but the cases in which a plural noun must take a singular verb are few.
When “okay” is clipped, use an apostrophe. “ 'kay ”
Can @asphyxiav2 fix doormat ML’s?What a Doormat, He has COPYING Skill which is OP, But he barely Copying all the skill he encounter, not even he copying Princess skill Appraisal which is Core of Copying skill,
and this Tournament arc Rivaling Namex Arc which is unhelpful
and as always thank Jailbird Scans for your effort
That's beyond my capabilities 😂Can @asphyxiav2 fix doormat ML’s?
ah, fistbump, I entirely overlooked that as a peaceful way of doing it. I was wondering if there was a safe way for him to strike the princess and not hurt her or be noticeable and all I thought of was a good slap on the ass.Princess should've given him a fistbump to encourage him and give him her skill while she's at it. But hey, a lap pillow is a good enough reward.
The author is at least aware that it is a method, since a few of the extra omake bits that are drawn at the end of some of the chapters does show him just randomly fist bumping citizens and getting random skills like Cooking. And it's also how he got the skills off his childhood friend too.ah, fistbump, I entirely overlooked that as a peaceful way of doing it. I was wondering if there was a safe way for him to strike the princess and not hurt her or be noticeable and all I thought of was a good slap on the ass.