Kuro Gal-san ga Kuru! - Vol. 1 Ch. 7 - Part-Time Gig

[pdonk]

my problem with the current font for the dude is that it makes me think he's speaking like a robot. Unless the raws use dramatically different fonts, I'd stick to the same one for all the characters.

And if you really want to make his thoughts different, just use italics or something maybe?

but, thank you for your efforts anyway!

 

[NODZZ]

Yeah missing the NTR tag, also leave Hairy out of this

 

[Ky0suke]

Ah excellent. I was hoping this would turn into my Gal Gohan replacement, and I was not disappointed.

Probably a bunch of others chiming in on the font stuff, so I'll just add this. Its good to experiment, and have fun with it to select a font which matches the tone of a character, or even just a single line, like with that last "Darling". It's not not like any one is throwing cash at you to crank these out. That being said, making the experience easy and enjoyable for the reader is part of the task at hand. For me, at least, the choice for Kuroda's lines was so thin, it made it difficult to read.

 

[Stoner]

Knowing tamagoro, old man wouldn't be out of the picture but he did vanilla so we're safe POG!

 

[ShionSinX]

Darling? Oh boy, shes digging it too deep, the minute he takes the bait shes in for a wild ride.

 

[dysperwithaperiod]

 

[AnacondaHL]

font makes more sense if it was just the thoughts yea, but a slight tweak to the style would be nice for better legibility

 

[ESCrowe]

No work can be done at beaches, get back in the office!

Spoiler

She'll just send him a few selfies including the ones she didn't mean to send

 

[chimera258]

I thought the hairy tag referred to the guy, not the girl?

 

[Filuth]

That tag came straight up from Hametomo

 

[juviegar]

ugly but not really a bastard. Just drunk

 

[Dlroth]

The font is really bad. I'm squinting my eyes just to read that

 

[Ashisu]

Kawaii dilf

 

[Chusep]

NTR

 

[dysperwithaperiod]

he’s actually got eyes, so we’re ok.

 

[darktennisball]

KNOW THE DIFFERENCE

 

[Kcjpunk]

thank god that old guy had eyes so that was not an ugly bastard

 

[S0ulReaper]

Those tags are my hated tag excluding mind break

 

[ShadeTorch]

@Chusep don't speak the devil's words!

 

[HiddenIsANinja]

@S0ulReaper
bro? what? did you just say you dont hate mind break?