Kuroha to Nijisuke: Kuroki Majo no Divertimento - Vol. 2 Ch. 5 - The Deceased

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sorry Granny your grandsons already pitch black XD

aaaah Kurohas sooo cute she heals my soul =D

other group rushed out a chapter... dunno how thats gonna go down but im not stopping that easily...

pages 14 kinda tough to get the phrasing right but i think it got it good :<
 
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Gonna be honest, I like this translation much better than the other group. "The deceased" sounds much better and fits better to the chapter theme as well instead of "Dead one". Thank you for picking this up and doing such an amazing job on it, I'm gonna read your releases over the other group's ^^
 
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@Somopes
Typos on page 2:
"... as flys being ..." >> "... as flies being ..."
"... those flys ..." >> "... those flies ..."
Typo on page 3: "Well, whether flys," >> "Well, whether flies,"
Typo on page 9: "witchs curse" >> "witch's curse"
Typo on page 16: "hellp" >> "hello"
Typos on page 17:
"reincanrate" >> "reincarnate"
"Minamis familiar" >> "Minam's familiar"
Typo on page 29: "saids too" >> "says too" / "said too" ???
Typo on page 33: "fasioned" >> "fashioned"
Typo on page 37: "the presidents secretary" >> "the president's secretary"
Typo on page 45: "are't" >> "aren't"
 

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