thanks for the chapter
M Midoribon Member Joined Jun 7, 2020 Messages 20 Mar 18, 2024 #22 Archit12 said: I definitely get what you mean, the way it's skipping from scene to scene feels way more unnatural than the previous chapters Click to expand... yeah i agree, the pacing was all over the place this chapter, it was a little confusing
Archit12 said: I definitely get what you mean, the way it's skipping from scene to scene feels way more unnatural than the previous chapters Click to expand... yeah i agree, the pacing was all over the place this chapter, it was a little confusing
eleven179 Dex-chan lover Joined Dec 1, 2019 Messages 711 Dec 13, 2024 #23 Do people spring up "divorce" like its a passing thing? "I got divorce, sorry you're present ended up for nothing" is kinda crazy.
Do people spring up "divorce" like its a passing thing? "I got divorce, sorry you're present ended up for nothing" is kinda crazy.
colorlesseatstomboys Dex-chan lover Joined Dec 13, 2023 Messages 1,484 Mar 11, 2025 #24 phorx said: I feel like that ex-colleague will become a problem, as will the actor who is supposed to be the love interest… ugh Click to expand... I feel like the ex-colleague won't ve an issue. Thought getting the vibes that an actor will be.
phorx said: I feel like that ex-colleague will become a problem, as will the actor who is supposed to be the love interest… ugh Click to expand... I feel like the ex-colleague won't ve an issue. Thought getting the vibes that an actor will be.
D dementati Dex-chan lover Joined Mar 23, 2023 Messages 2,407 Mar 13, 2025 #25 eleven179 said: Do people spring up "divorce" like its a passing thing? "I got divorce, sorry you're present ended up for nothing" is kinda crazy. Click to expand... People often make light of heavy topics so as not to burden the other person. Especially if Tokita didn't know her ex, I don't think it's very strange.
eleven179 said: Do people spring up "divorce" like its a passing thing? "I got divorce, sorry you're present ended up for nothing" is kinda crazy. Click to expand... People often make light of heavy topics so as not to burden the other person. Especially if Tokita didn't know her ex, I don't think it's very strange.
D dementati Dex-chan lover Joined Mar 23, 2023 Messages 2,407 Mar 13, 2025 #26 I like the scene transition from the conversation with Miyoshi to Yuu, it's like she was voicing the thoughts of the reader.
I like the scene transition from the conversation with Miyoshi to Yuu, it's like she was voicing the thoughts of the reader.