Lady Scarlet - Vol. 1 Ch. 4

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Reading through the available chapters on the official release, it seems to be very bland at the start, but gets some steam going by chapter 7 more or less.

Kinda sad that all the drama and romance is stuffed into those first chapters, instead of establishing enough of a setting for everything to feel more grounded, and that they don't delve well into the context or though process that each character has for their respective actions and reactions at the beginning, robs a lot of the strength the leads' dynamic has, and makes it seems like a dumb misunderstanding.

Also for the main difference for this story to be our FL desiring to be an accomplished pianist and our ML being a pauper-to-rich man that has lots of enemies...neither is decently used until way later, when people have already given up on the story.


My point is, please continue the TL, I'm interested in your take on this, because God do they mess up the dialog very annoyingly on the official release.
 

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