LAND ESCAPE - Oneshot

[MangaDex]

 

[Merinrin]

Love this oneshot so much, the art, the pacing, everything!

 

[Niewaznekto]

Personally found the pacing bad, and the art needed more polish, as it was sometimes too cluttered to know what was going on.
All in all it felt like trying to put a short story in a tweet.

 

[zymosan99]

bizzare

 

[AcidVlad]

Wow
Kino

 

[Pouco-chan]

Oh, shit! That was heavier than the interest on my credit card at the end of the month~
Thks for the tl~

 

[That-Guy]

The art is pretty and stories like this where someone gets horribly abused never fails to make my blood boil. I know it's fiction yet I can't help but feel anger in my body when this topic is portrayed.

Anw, thanks for the TL and y'all have a good day now

 

[resudom]

Wow the art. It's very much distorted & messy just like MCs' life & future. Personally my eyes hate it but my mind loves it

 

[Aliamus]

Peanut butter jelly with a Baseball Bat​

 

[Ichaivalrose]

Wow this was uhhh insanely cool , art was fuckin amazing and the subject matter and their relationship worked rly well despite being only 9 pages

Wish there was more of this one , ty for tl!

 

[Rocketn00b3]

did they jump off the bridge at the end or smth, I'm a bit confused

 

[Dominus_deImmortales]

did they jump off the bridge at the end or smth, I'm a bit confused

I think they did a lover's suicide. That's what I call it when a couple commit suicide together

 

[Syapaaye]

The pacing is absolutely horrible. Nonetheless, I can see the potential. It could, it should've been good were it had more pages, man.

 

[Nicopico]

can't believe that was only 10 pages. idk what people are talking about, to me the pace is hey, here's this full hearted, anguished art, go eat your heart out. really hoping to see more of this author in the future.

 

[ieatass69]

did they jump off the bridge at the end or smth, I'm a bit confused

they rushed into the night

 

[Donirexian]

they rushed into the night

perhaps they were racing into the night, if you catch my drift

I think the story overall is alright but I feel like I've seen this enough times in other yuri manga that it doesn't warrant enough of a surprise factor from me. At least they ended up happy in their last moments.

 

[YotoHime]

“Uchi” has nothing to do with those groups
Don’t make stuff up about shit you don’t know about, thank you
Don’t trust me? Ask any native

 

[Sleepingair]

on just a snap the story went in full dark mode.
Wait can someone confirm, did she get pregnant by her father ? Did they get suicide together in the end?

 

[XpyRay]

Idk why so many people habe a problem with pacing, I think that for this short premise the ten pages it has were utilised quite well

 

[feha]

Personally found the pacing bad, and the art needed more polish, as it was sometimes too cluttered to know what was going on.
All in all it felt like trying to put a short story in a tweet.

Wow the art. It's very much distorted & messy just like MCs' life & future. Personally my eyes hate it but my mind loves it

I agree that it being messy works fairly good as a metaphor for the girls distorted lives, but I also think it was overly messy at times, to the point several panels were really hard to parse. Doesn't matter how thematic something is, if you can't even see what it's meant to be.

did they jump off the bridge at the end or smth, I'm a bit confused

I think they did a lover's suicide. That's what I call it when a couple commit suicide together

Nah. They threw murder weapons into the water, to dispose of evidence. Aside from how they wouldn't do that if they planned to suicide anyway, there is also the fact that drowned bodies in very public waterways rarely disappear. Not to mention they had just gotten a load of cash and planned to eat croquettes. Or the fact that they wanted to deal with the belly first. Or that they just realized their love for each others and finally got rid of their issues, allowing them to finally have a happy future. and so on.
So no, they didn't suicide.