Lanzenreiter - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - The Colosseum

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The art is nice, but the conversations are extremely jarring.
Like what bartender would say "what is it? what size of beer would you like to have?"
The fact that the MC sat down, waited for the barkeep to ask is weird anyway.
There's also too much dialogue that is absolutely useless and even counter-productive. 36 panels of exposition at a bar in the first chapter is way too much.
 
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the concept is interesting, but the art is too stiff, also the dialogue is strange in some place
 

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