I really like the art! The story seems interesting, although I'm a bit confused about a few things, but questions are expected when we're still at the beginning
One thing though, the wording seems a bit weird sometimes (esp. when the guy talks to his mother), so you might want someone to beta-read it for you. I
think I understood what they meant, though.
Looking forward to see more and uncover who is who
Thank you for the chapter! <3