Laos Chronicles - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

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I really like the art! The story seems interesting, although I'm a bit confused about a few things, but questions are expected when we're still at the beginning :)
One thing though, the wording seems a bit weird sometimes (esp. when the guy talks to his mother), so you might want someone to beta-read it for you. I think I understood what they meant, though.

Looking forward to see more and uncover who is who :D
Thank you for the chapter! <3
 
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I will try my best to translate it as good as I can. I really will! Thank you.
 

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