I actively have to remind myself that this is you first big scanlation project at this point. You're doing a fantastic job.
Very good choices of fonts, and I love the scanlated sound effects! Not to mention, the improved translation over the previous version of this specific story. It's nice to have a translation that matches the tone of the story this time around.
Oh yeah, and I was particularly impressed by your work on that handwritten note by Mizuki's mother. You made that look so natural.
I sometimes really get lost in the sauce of redrawing and reviewing small changes after small changes, that I feel that maybe im overdoing it, thanks for reassuring me that im going for the right track. It really does make the effort worth it.
I love this manga, I want to read it once again and feel that I properly enjoyed that read. That's my baseline.
On the mom's note, I want to shout out
AnonBlack's Typesetting Guide, since their visual guide for fonts helped me a ton find the correct one for it (and most I've used throught the manga).
I'm amazed sometimes on the amount of resources for scanlating around, it's a nice community.