Last Waltz - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - act:1

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Not sure if I was just skimming too quickly, but the story felt all over the place.

It doesn't help the skimming when some characters look alike per artstyle.
 
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@Lithe Nah I felt the same way. Characters looking similar, art being kinda unclear at times, and the story not making much sense. Can't say I feel any urge to continue reading.
 
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are you guys me? Just finished reading the first chapter and feel the same. The sameface is real
 
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This was kinda confusing. Felt really hard to follow whats going on. Some girl whos strong, but posing as a weak student whos doing missions ? ? Doesnt explain why she has an informant already, or shes helping people out. Who was the girl in the colour pages ? and how does she relate to the story ? Whys the pres telling the MC what to do ? And in the end, the people she saves ? dont even remember/meet her ever again?

Oh and shes got one of the teachers as her little submissive lover already. Didnt want to show how "that" happened ? already predetermined ?
 
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Yeah. Kind of confusing, though i like the premise of this girl having a double life as some school girl vigilante
 
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What did I just read?
I couldn't tell who the one talking was at almost any given point in time...
 

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