Late Winter - Ch. 13 - Close Relationship

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You guys need to do better proofreading. This chapter was very stilted to read.
 
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Alright, calling a couple of things. First, she says she doesn't believe a stranger would sacrifice themselves for another stranger. Yet, Mickey sacrificed himself for her. She sacrificed herself for him. Her own actions contradict her belief system. Means she doesn't really believe that. Two, the author forced the plot to make her right by having Camp Hope, in the usual post-apocalyptic trope/cliche, not be what it claims to be. Of course, there can never just be good people in the world.😒🙄
 

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