Level 99 Boukensha ni Yoru Hajimete no Ryouchi Keiei - Ch. 1.3

[MangaDex]

 

[TulipMoon]

I am looking for a proofreader for this manga!

sorry for the mistakes :c

 

[FgoSegul]

Tbh it feels like there’s too much going on in the art. Like im no graduate in fine art but it was kinda dizzying to read with how cluttered the artist’s art comes off. :|

 

[Deunesse]

This shit is all over the place. The art and pacing just make it more confusing. I feels bad if this is now common approach in manga industries where they're just publish any story then axed anything that isn't get enough attention. It'll hit the author for sure if it's true

 

[JennyTals]

The translation is fine. Great even. It's just that the manga's pacing, flashbacks and time skips are all so random and feels like they wanted to cram a whole back story, prologue, and about 10 chapters into one. And why the heck does it feel like every body's screaming 😂

 

[Grimwear]

I mean I think a proofreader would help but honestly the problem is the manga itself. What the heck is going on, we keep jumping every which way. When did the God get involved? What's his point? I thought the girl Valt was forced into accepting the land because the other...heroes? didn't want it. But was this land instead a reward they asked for from God? Just..what the heck is happening.

 

[Ari2142]

I think this manga to advanced for me. I can't understand at all what's going on.

 

[Kynnath]

So if I understood it correctly the knight lady got pressured into accepting a dilapidated territory after the other, more savvy heroes, refused. The king presumably wants the heroes to spend their own money rebuilding the territory, thus injecting gold into the kingdom's economy. Because they're her friends and they saved the world together, they agreed to help her for at least one year. Then during the night, they all had similar dreams where a god offered rewards, and the MC for some reason, even though he was perfectly aware of the mess they were in, didn't wish for anything. One of the other heroes however wished for a castle, and so the god created a massive castle for them.

Which raises the question, why would the MC not request anything else that could help with managing the territory? Why would he tell god he's fine, when right before he was complaining about all their problems?

 

[kaikalaila]

@kynnath cliche but probably he know there's a price and that simply wishing for it is not good or something...Like if its given then it has no value lol

 

[Greyhood]

it was a struggle to go through all the narratif time skips.
I don't understand something tho, MC's goal is apparently to go back to his world, and when faced with the Godess who's asking what kind of reward he wants, he just pass ? Did he just kick a god tier wish out or just left it for after ? This read brought me confusion.

 

[Syanalassa]

@Kynnath maybe he passed because he knew it would be a monkey paw wish or put him indebt to the gods
like the castle from the wish wash grander than the royal castle so will attract the Kings envy / ire
the gods might have also said they cant return him home in which case his only worth while wish is gone

 

[Kynnath]

@Syanalassa Is that you coming up with excuses for the MC being dumb, or was that stated somewhere? The MC just says "There was nothing in particular I wanted, so I passed". The castle also wasn't a monkey paw's wish. It was what Renona wanted. Besides, if the king decides he wants the castle for himself and say, moves the capital over, that also solves their problem of having to manage the territory: it's once again the king's territory and they're free. And it wouldn't put him in debt to the gods, since it was his reward in the first place.

"The gods might have also said", but they didn't. The MC just didn't think of anything and told god he wasn't interested in a wish, even though it could have solved any one issue he had. And apparently, it literally was nearly anything, and particularly anything material, since a massive castle built overnight was allowed. It feels more like the typical japanese MC that wants for nothing because the author thinks "not wanting anything" is in some way a positive trait.

 

[Checkmate90]

Buena suerte, compañero.

 

[Nunuwillump]

The TLs future wife is lucky T_T

 

[Chizan]

I don't mind the art, but the pacing and flow, jezuz... It might be a strange comparison but it makes me think of the time I watched Dangaioh(OVA) by Manga Entertainment. The feeling I got was like watching a detached commercial, or perhaps even better explained as watching a glorified recap episode at breakneck speed(it was originally released as individual volumes by U.S. Renditions, but ME's compilation volume consisted of recap of volume one, and episodes 2 and 3 squeezed together, who knows what they were thinking?...)

The same kind of detachment to the story I get reading this. Is the novel the same or is it the fault of the manga author?

 

[welcome2atlantis]

It will be such a chore cleaning that castle.
Didn't it come with automatic cleaning miracle or autorepair function? orz

 

[Lekmir]

La mejor de las suertes.