This is horrible. It's not the TL. The manga raw is just all over the place. Completely incoherent. It's like the mangaka is an isekai fan who decided to write a story while on shrooms the whole time.
Considering this author almost exclusively writes garbage quality BL - no wonder.
I gave this an honest chance, but after two chapters it's still a mess. Feels like there's supposed to be a full page of content in-between each panel of each page, so reading this is rather difficult as the story feels like it's constantly skipping things.
Agreed with @frungy, this has the type of setting I like, but the flow is complete garbage. Throwing around characters and locations, and just exposition. the panels look nice, but from to another it just jumps wildly.
The manga is just working through a check list and I doubt any editor has actually looked at this. This needed some serious guidance.
i figured the translators was just doing what some other translators do and skip pages but no, the raws are exactly the same. Man, if the author doesn't give a damn, why should anyone else?
Guys, the mangaka is the problem here, not the author. The novel version is way better and more interesting and detailed compared to this garbage adaptation.