Levelling Up In An Exclusive Dungeon
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what a dumb father.
"Well it says out of order, go in there anyway son!"
"Well it says out of order, go in there anyway son!"
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Run of the mill, generic slop.
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No solo leveling was a knock off of a 100+ other Korean works and everything Korean is a Japanese knock off of something the Japanese knocked off from an old Chinese book
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It's palatable.
I like it.
I like it.
I don't know what it is, but the writing feels like two AI talking to each other telling a story, and the art is weird at times (no, not saying Ai art), but things like the bat getting knocked away and then the next panel he's far away with the bat still in hand like they are re-using art or just drawing out of order, or something.. and the little smirk in every image is weird for the MC and Lucia.
This just doesn't feel like it comes together, it feels like a mix of testing out AI stories as writing, and having a bunch of different people draw scenes.
This just doesn't feel like it comes together, it feels like a mix of testing out AI stories as writing, and having a bunch of different people draw scenes.
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This webtoon is a 3/10 at best.
The author will constantly introduce new things like abilities/skills, items, people, and then immediately forget they exist a couple chapters later.
Alongside sloppy writing, the art itself is also a problem at times. The artist cannot draw supernatural fight scenes. absolutely every fight in this webtoon looks like it was meant to be in a worse version of Mercenary Enrollment.
These characters are super humans, they can move faster than human perception, they can jump from skyscrapers and land without any damage, they can shoot fireballs and electricity out of their hands. But every single fight feels weak and slow. There are so many manga out there with regular human tier characters showing infinitely more speed and weight behind each punch compared to this lackluster mess.
The author will constantly introduce new things like abilities/skills, items, people, and then immediately forget they exist a couple chapters later.
At one point the main character gets a skill that shows a number above people's heads that represents their karma in a numerical stat form, alongside this ability, the main character gets a skill that boosts his stats based on how much karma the other person has, so if he's fighting a mass murderer he basically becomes Goku for that fight. The author completely drops these two abilities and doesn't mention them again within 5 chapters of them appearing.
Another thing that gets forgotten about, when the main character first kills another human in self defense, the cops give him a small device he needs to wear that monitors him and his conversations to prevent him from talking about the karma/villain system to anyone. Like a chapter later his elf partner grabs the device and hands it to the black smith dwarf to modify it, and then it just never comes up ever again. The police literally call the thing a tracker, it's supposed to let them keep tabs on him and it's just gone now with no repercussions or explanation.
Another thing that gets forgotten about, when the main character first kills another human in self defense, the cops give him a small device he needs to wear that monitors him and his conversations to prevent him from talking about the karma/villain system to anyone. Like a chapter later his elf partner grabs the device and hands it to the black smith dwarf to modify it, and then it just never comes up ever again. The police literally call the thing a tracker, it's supposed to let them keep tabs on him and it's just gone now with no repercussions or explanation.
Alongside sloppy writing, the art itself is also a problem at times. The artist cannot draw supernatural fight scenes. absolutely every fight in this webtoon looks like it was meant to be in a worse version of Mercenary Enrollment.
These characters are super humans, they can move faster than human perception, they can jump from skyscrapers and land without any damage, they can shoot fireballs and electricity out of their hands. But every single fight feels weak and slow. There are so many manga out there with regular human tier characters showing infinitely more speed and weight behind each punch compared to this lackluster mess.
