This is pretty good, and also pretty unique. It's a shame it isn't getting too much attention over here, but you can probably check it out at an aggregator site. It does have some iffy moments tho where you think, "why would the character even bother thinking that? Does he lack brain cells?" But I guess it's the imperfect character type of thing (ie. not the big brain character that miraculously has a foolproof solution to every problem)