Lol. Oakley was right that Daisy wasn't dating Evans! Even if she was jealous, it's a good thing she probed for information first before doing anything!
Daisy was a pretty bad girl though. Flirting with so many people? Well, Evan's dad has her beat. He flirts with way more people! I was surprised that he cameo'd though. We usually don't see him unless Evans is there. Well, it's a good thing he spent time with his future daughter-in-law!
Also, in page 8, I'm not quite sure what the narrator is saying. The raw says "「言ってそう」より、「言われたい」だった。", which DeepL translated as It was more "I want to be told" than "I think I'm going to say it."
So I think the sentence is implying that the face Oakley is making is because she wants Evans to say this to her, not because she actually thinks Evans said it. So I think adding the fact Oakley wanted Evans to say this to her to your sentence would add more context to it.