Looking for honest feedback on my new yuri battle harem novel and manga

[coldwarrior12]

Hey everyone

I’m working on an original project called (Kuina: Rise of the All-Girl Harem). It’s a mix of yuri romance, intense battles, dark comedy, and over-the-top smut, basically an unapologetic ride where a fiery redhead named Kuina kills men, gains power, and builds a harem of strong, dangerous women around her.

The light novel is about 55 chapters total (currently at 41), and the main goal is to expand it into a full manga that has a 1 chapter

What I’d love from you:
Does this concept sound interesting or fresh to you?
Do you enjoy the idea of a yuri harem that mixes romance + action, + humor?

Honest opinions mean the world to me, positive or critical, so I can see how this idea lands with new readers 💖.

Thanks a lot for reading!

 

[nthuanreal]

Well... To be honest, if you're being abused. Call for help.

1/ Concept fine, but its extreme feminism ideal make it boring. And i don't see where is the humour part in MC built.
2/ Title ok, illustration image used AI is acceptable. However, Synopsis will need better improvement: it is boring, contained unnecessary informations, lack of context/world building. Even if I ignore all the tag and the concept, this synopsis won't get my attention.

Good luck.

 

[coldwarrior12]

Well... To be honest, if you're being abused. Call for help.

1/ Concept fine, but its extreme feminism ideal make it boring. And i don't see where is the humour part in MC built.
2/ Title ok, illustration image used AI is acceptable. However, Synopsis will need better improvement: it is boring, contained unnecessary informations, lack of context/world building. Even if I ignore all the tag and the concept, this synopsis won't get my attention.

Good luck.

I appreciate your comment, i try my best!