The MC skews a man through the chest with a sword, Slice of Life indeed .we are now on the 6th chapter and the story hasnt even started. Is it gonna be SOL forever?
I really liked that arc, because of how it introduced us readers to just how esoteric a magear can be.Chapter 4 & 5 had conflict over a magear that neither the peddlers or the bandits actually understood what it is.
The MC skews a man through the chest with a sword, Slice of Life indeed .
On a side note, I do like how down to earth & gritty this series has been, with the previous chapters fleshing out how less knowledge people have regarding magic in general:
Kuon is also at least a few centuries old and is also evidently one of the strongest magicians in the setting, yet her desire to do her own thing and not interacting with institutes also makes how not well known in the current era.
- Chapter 1 & 2 has people completely underestimating just how dangerous magicians can be, with us seeing the fallout from that chapter with the 2 magicians commenting how the incredible dangerous Kuon is.
- Chapter 4 & 5 had conflict over a magear that neither the peddlers or the bandits actually understood what it is.
I also like how Gull is kind of a meathead, but is also introspective on his own capabilities & limitations, evidently in this chapter but also in chapter 3.
You're right, I fixed it. Thank you.Page 6, panel 4 has a weird slip of conjugation.
Gull says that he wasn't able to save the hostage, and would've had to watch her die. The first one should instead be wouldn't've, since the statement he's making something of a speculative declaration, rather than a completely affirmative one.
And yes, 'wouldn't've' looks strange, but it's nonetheless grammatically sound if space didn't permit for a full 'wouldn't have.'
Thank God someone notice that. What IT'S that supposed to be? Foot or hand. It bends weirdly.that slave trader's foot is horribly broken