Lycanthrope Bouken Hoken - Vol. 2 Ch. 15 - Incident 15 What adventurers insurance is.

Dex-chan lover
Joined
Jun 17, 2018
Messages
4,159
@genderbenderbb2
> The number of powerful adventurers kept on increasing... from the monsters around this area. There have been so many reports like that.
Probably should swap last two bubbles, making them a single sentence.
> As long as i'm able to day after day help their lives on to the "Next".
Not sure if "Next" means "next level", but shouldn't "day after day" be placed at the end of the sentence?
 
Power Uploader
Joined
Feb 6, 2018
Messages
354
@HYBRID_BEING the texts were split on purpose so I left as is.

That second part though, I'll fix up in the future but the gist of it still works in a sense.
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Jun 17, 2018
Messages
4,159
@genderbenderbb2
I mean, "'The number of powerful adventurers kept on increasing...' from the monsters around this area." just doesn't make any sense as a sentence. And the order of the "monsters" and "report" bubbles seems to be the usual Japanese inversion thing - "...from the monsters around this area, there have been so many reports like that".
Looking at the raws, there seem to be a huge pause after the "adventurers" line on first page, and ellipsis before the "monster" line on the second page. Since first page is kind of prelude what he says on page 2, and there is no indication that "monsters" and "report" bubbles are two different sentences, something like "The number of powerful adventurers kept on increasing... There have been so many reports like that from the monsters around this area." would have sounded better.
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Apr 15, 2018
Messages
3,168
The plot advanced so fast, I thought this got axed, lol. Plot is kinda stupid tho.
 

Users who are viewing this thread

Top