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"this character is trash because he cant use magic and can only use melee and blink
TF u mean blink is OP AF skill especially for melee damage dealer.
"the skill set has many downside like uncontrollable blink direction, cooldown and stuns"
"ah i see, that make sense why this characters isnt OP"
in the very fkin same page:
"all the downside are nullified" because he try hard
korean and their inability to make consistent "weakness" and writing because nON-Op mC suCKs
 
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Read the first 4 chapters, and so far I do not like how quick the story is to brush off the plot holes of how MC can flat out negate the flaws of the 'Blink' ability. Yeah the best explanation for MC negating the drawbacls of his ability is, controlling distance-wise, deactivating the ability 0.1 seconds after using it, but that literally does not explain how 0.1 can make you stop between 3 to 9 meters like does canceling activation make you go to 3 meters? 9 meters? 5 meters? The MC also just brushes off how the 'random direction' the 'Blink' ability shoots you at is just "um actually, nobody knows how to control where to go with Blink" like bruh, the distance and direction of 'Blink' is presented to be randomized yet MC has no issues with either. The 3rd flaw of 'Blink' is the stun/paralysis after using it, which MC literally only mentions once and doesn't bring it up as even other characters brings it up. Super annoying plot hole I'm seeing but hopefully it gets a explanation than something half-assed and half explained

Chapter 6: bruh how do you remember an entire character lore but not their unique magic, hell this is literally the first time I've seen lightning and ice magic together, AND YOU WERE SAVED BY IT FOD YOYR TRUE ENDING ANY% SPEEDRUN YOU DINGUS!
 
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Read the first 4 chapters, and so far I do not like how quick the story is to brush off the plot holes of how MC can flat out negate the flaws of the 'Blink' ability. Yeah the best explanation for MC negating the drawbacls of his ability is, controlling distance-wise, deactivating the ability 0.1 seconds after using it, but that literally does not explain how 0.1 can make you stop between 3 to 9 meters like does canceling activation make you go to 3 meters? 9 meters? 5 meters? The MC also just brushes off how the 'random direction' the 'Blink' ability shoots you at is just "um actually, nobody knows how to control where to go with Blink" like bruh, the distance and direction of 'Blink' is presented to be randomized yet MC has no issues with either. The 3rd flaw of 'Blink' is the stun/paralysis after using it, which MC literally only mentions once and doesn't bring it up as even other characters brings it up. Super annoying plot hole I'm seeing but hopefully it gets a explanation than something half-assed and half explained

Chapter 6: bruh how do you remember an entire character lore but not their unique magic, hell this is literally the first time I've seen lightning and ice magic together, AND YOU WERE SAVED BY IT FOD YOYR TRUE ENDING ANY% SPEEDRUN YOU DINGUS!

ikr,
atleast make the background make sense like :

"This characters is actually pretty strong, but in a world where magic is op and Meta, his inability to use magic other than blink makes this characters really complex with extremely harsh early game, steep learning curve and high skill ceiling. and even if you managed to get used to it, it has low investment return and really repetitive playstyle at end game. which make it really unpopular characters among player"

there, you dont need to make up for bullshit downside just for it to be ignored later on because author doesn't have the brain power to actually make a reasonable reason to exploit such weakness other than "he just train hard"

the skill really have no downside,
its says cooldown but the player just use it whatever they like. and he never runs out of mana doing so.
like wtf? your body unable to contain mana, therefore, you can use the skill infinitely?
 
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During chapter 25, he life was in danger, there were several situations where he would have died. In the first chapter, we saw him killing the dark magics who were trying to kill him. Sure, he can't kill a student, especially not one who is a royalty. But you really couldn't even attack them? Just because you think the enemy has given up, doesn't mean they have. There uninjured, you're close to them, they can use magic to attack you. They've already tried to kill you several times before, why would they not now? What would have changed in there mind in the last 10 seconds to make them think they lost? Throw a punch, a stab to the knee or arm? Are you really that worried that you would face execution if you injured the royalty? Or is it that they are kind and can't hurt someone when they can avoid it. The corrector should act kind, that's how they made him to be, but considering chapter 1, im shocked that he refused no matter the situation to harm his opponent in any way when they would not do the same. Kindness the that degree will only come back to bite him in the ass. If there trying to build him up to fight the final boss of this story, he can not make it with this trait unless the author pulls some shenanigans.
Considering how the character has been portrayed so far, they should be kind to most, with none given to there enemies, and willing to fight dirty considering his "weak" abilities. This is not how they are being portrayed. You don't always need a lawfully good main character, sometimes a chaotic good would be more appropriate for this character.
Its a good story, but I don't want to see this story have the main character act as the other one thousand and one isekai stories do. These story beats worsen the story a significant amount.
Point is, the main character is acting soft, and acting that way should be punished, but is going to be rewarded as is the case in most stories.
REVIEW:
When comparing this story to its peers, The Demon Prince Goes to the Academy, How To Live As An Unlicensed Healer, Leveling Beyond the Max, Mightiest Melle Magician, it holds up to them. The art is acceptable. The story beats are like all the others, acceptable. Its main differing factor is the MC ability to teleport a distance of up to 10m every 3 seconds. 3 seconds of course means 0.3 to 30 seconds depending on the situation. If you enjoy seeing this teleport ability, and a MC who every thinks is the absolute worst in ability, rise up to become the strongest, then this is for you.
If you can let go of the teleport aspect, and want a story where the main character is putting in a lot more effort, clearly, obviously more, then go read The Extra's Academy Survival Guide. Up to at least, 82, its the great, 9/10.

Rating:
5/10, will be 6.5/10 if you are able to skip of the parts that suck.
If you got nothing else to do and are bored, read it, otherwise its a waste of time.
 
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Apparently Koreans never saw any X-men comics/movies/games with Nightcrawler. He's straight up BROKEN.
 
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Manwha tend to have plotholes and heavy chuuni vibes. But this one goes extra heavy on both. Dropped.
 
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This is so boring. It has all the ingredients necessary for a good story, but I tried reading it twice and gave up after just a few chapters both times. The story flows as it would in a book, but it's not a book, it's a comic. If you're adapting it directly, reading it will be torture.
 
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ikr,
atleast make the background make sense like :

"This characters is actually pretty strong, but in a world where magic is op and Meta, his inability to use magic other than blink makes this characters really complex with extremely harsh early game, steep learning curve and high skill ceiling. and even if you managed to get used to it, it has low investment return and really repetitive playstyle at end game. which make it really unpopular characters among player"

there, you dont need to make up for bullshit downside just for it to be ignored later on because author doesn't have the brain power to actually make a reasonable reason to exploit such weakness other than "he just train hard"

the skill really have no downside,
its says cooldown but the player just use it whatever they like. and he never runs out of mana doing so.
like wtf? your body unable to contain mana, therefore, you can use the skill infinitely?
Agreed. Ending Maker had something similar to this where the protags two characters are poorly ranked almost exclusively due to how annoying their tutorials are. The mage who would be an expert at ranged combat has to survive a tutorial where you are stuck in enclosed spaces that give little room to dodge and the martial artist you have to go through a stupidly time consuming tutorial where you're character constantly passes out and fails to do anything. And if I remember correctly the two are lowest ranked in terms of popularity among the player base not power which I believe had other characters ranked higher and lower. It basically was I believe why play one of the characters with the worst tutorials in the game when there's other character choices that are just as good if not better and don't have a horrendously bad first chapter?

Which also just reminds me that I don't get the 'setting'/'game' for this one. It feels like the author slapped popular tropes together without really thinking about it too much.

Game was made as a female oriented dating sim but it attracted a male player base as well because of the jrpg aspects and fights. Okay, yep have seen it before. Especially when people have tried taking the villainess isekai trend but market towards guy.

Main character chose an unconventional class/character and fighting style that only they've pulled off that makes them better than others. Okay, yep have seen it before.

Main character is reincarnated as a side character not related to the main plot and worries about interacting with the main characters? Again have seen it before, but wait... That doesn't really make sense with the above?

Why is one of the player choices unrelated to the rest of the main characters? In fact actually who are the other player character choices? Because he mentions the protagonist Flame whose choices are important for the route / whether certain characters end up evil or good. But like if that is the case are other characters people you choose to play as for like a completely different game mode and the story is tied to playing as Flame? Or is there another level of adaptions that this work went through (from fantasy romance novel to fantasy romance dating sim game to fantasy romance jrpg) which doesn't seem tot be the case unless I missed something?

Like when they mention oh hey this primarily aimed at girls romance game got popular with males for the rpg and combat elements it is usually you are controlling a party or taking control of certain party members. Not that you have a character that seems to be completely separate from the story of the romance going on who you just fight bosses at.

And the MC mentions wanting to stay separate from the 'main characters' but like that makes little sense for several reasons. One if this was a player character option than he should be able to be involved in the main plot even if the MC said he didn't pay attention to that (which also adds the fact that for someone who didn't pay attention the plot/lore he seems to recognize a lot of the important story characters, know their character arcs and backstories, and also know the history of this game setting going back to its roots) so his character's storyline should involve interacting with them later even if he starts separate. Two if he doesn't care about the lore why would he care if he messes with things. Three he was specifically told to find the true ending which will be found by exploring new options (like having fought off his pursuers rather than just fleeing) so wouldn't that require interacting with the main characters and steering the story in the right direction / finding the path to the true ending? Like isn't oh I don't want to be involved with any important character run counter to his goal?

I'll also add for the game not sure how it goes we will take this romance fantasy novel to adapt for our dating sim and rather than have you play the protagonist from that we'll have you play an isekai'd girl who due to her usurping the heroine position means the old heroine dies tragically and no this wasn't because she was secretly evil or anything (in fact based on Flame being rude in chapter 11 it could be Flame is secredly evil (I wouldn't say her not being friendly with the MC means she has to be evil but I wouldn't be surprised if it just does that because slapping common tropes together and in a lot of these your female characters are not immedietely nice and friendly they are then evil)), you just took her spot. Like I can't see fans of that work being happy with that adaption or the righs holder agreeing if the novel was popular and if the novel wasn't popular I don't see why would have adapted it (unless misread and the novel is not supposed to have existed in real life and only exists as a setting detail for the iseaki protagonist girl who is not a playable character or not a you are required to play as her character).

And finally the details the glasses choose to give and what the MC is capable of noticing are wild at times. It is supposed to captue character information so you can review stuff later, but doesn't seem to record the things he directly witnesses and instead just give basic bios of people? And he fails to extrapolate things from there. Who is this girl? Doesn't realize she's the one who saved him despite having the same hair color and magic which the glasses don't reveal. Oh why is this girl late? Will call out she has an evil mother, but neither him nor the glasses recognize the fact that she clearly has a mark on her cheek from where her mother struck her.

I could barely get past 10 chapters of this one. I don't think I'll be continuing and I really don't see a reason to read it over its peers which are also pretty formulaic and relying on popular tropes, but at least some of those think things out a bit more.
 

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