Mada Kimi o Miageteru

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Art is great, but the MMC feels rather insufferable right now with how pathetic and wallowing in self-pity he is. Seems to have had no mental development in the years since his school days. Urgently needs some redeeming qualities to make him interesting as a character based in himself, not just because he's the inexplicable object of interest of a girl. That shit may work in his hentai, but a normal story needs better charaterisation of the protagonists.
 
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Story seems bad, a lustful partner doesn't make a good loving one, and he's just, lame
(If she was a teacher, trusted and relied on by children, she'd be a great mother)
(Worst teachers would be the pedophiles on the news, both men and women)
(Some women even realise "He's just using me for sex", these are the "situationship"s you hear about, they never end well)

Who knows, might lead somewhere, but it seems boring, looks good though
 

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