Madogiwa Henshuu to Baka ni Sareta Ore ga, Futago JK to Doukyo suru Koto ni Natta - Ch. 1

[Arcverson]

"Used goods"? Wtf, are you sick in your head? Your mother is "used goods".

Triggered LMAO
Looks like I hit a nerve, I'm surprised you haven't called me an incel yet

 

[YamiryuuZero]

The art being this amateurish is killing it for me. The guy looks like he's too young on the eyes and too old on the chin, it's difficult to tell what sizes the characters are supposed to be in relation to each other, and in this panel the perspective is so wrong you can't even tell what's going on, with his hand being way too big compared to hers despite both their hands being on the same plane in the foreshortening.


The backgrounds are also extremely empty and use too much tone to create the abstraction of a space to compensate. Reading this makes me feel like I'm reading one of my old works, when I used to fall under the same traps and use shortcuts instead of working on my fundaments and actually putting in the effort to make backgrounds.

I hope the author gets better after this chapter, he should use more references, not only for poses but also for objects and furniture. At the level the author is in, just using good references is going to make the drawings exponentially better!

 

[mrclamp]

He will eventually touch them. But they won't be the first.

Not completely sure I understand this comment lol.

are you saying they end up doing stuff with other guys (or they did prior to this)?

Just trying to gauge a bit to see if I want to continue.

 

[ItsThatBriGuy]

Not completely sure I understand this comment lol.

are you saying they end up doing stuff with other guys (or they did prior to this)?

Just trying to gauge a bit to see if I want to continue.

Stuff from both this story's future and from the shared universe it's part of:

Spoiler

He gets with both the head female bodyguard of the rich guy's household (with whom he has history) and then with that guy's granddaughter (who he also works with as editor) (just after she turns 18) before eventually relenting and allowing these two girls to enter the harem fully. Both of these other characters and others around them appear in other stories in this universe by the same author, though they haven't popped up in this manga this early on.

The girls in question here have been saving themselves for MC (and doing serious bridal training to that end) since they were little.

 

[Hades_HAE]

ngl, these mangakas alway use (someone else) typical motifs many and many times. this one is cheap copycat of [Hige wo Soru. Soshite Joshikousei wo Hirou.] (alr has anime adaption and it is fr wholesome and mavelous 8/10, not like this one, the story ain't even smooth and viewer fishing style for JPNese )

 

[Hades_HAE]

This series is a blatant copy of [Hige wo Soru. Soshite Joshikousei wo Hirou.]

 

[kmd3133]

so we wont know why wife cheated? if it wasnt younger coworker i would think that coworker pushes work onto him so he is always late and coworker ducking his wife? but younger one pushing his work is kinda odd so. also from the vibe of these girls i can understand this: gyaru is wingman and older sister the one loving sensei for real. well anyway we need more chapters to see whats going on.

 

[kmd3133]

This series is a blatant copy of [Hige wo Soru. Soshite Joshikousei wo Hirou.]

i felt like that too and gyaru in that was a friend and now its sister and wingman again. feels the same aside from cheating part.

 

[alucard680]

Stuff from both this story's future and from the shared universe it's part of:

Spoiler

He gets with both the head female bodyguard of the rich guy's household (with whom he has history) and then with that guy's granddaughter (who he also works with as editor) (just after she turns 18) before eventually relenting and allowing these two girls to enter the harem fully. Both of these other characters and others around them appear in other stories in this universe by the same author, though they haven't popped up in this manga this early on.

The girls in question here have been saving themselves for MC (and doing serious bridal training to that end) since they were little.

Spoiler

That weird fetish that autors have of adult MC have 2 little girls fall in love with him and make their dream in life to be the wives of that MC when their older.Too unrealistic that 2 childs will still remember you after not seeing you for years.

 

[lovolo]

I checked a bit of the novel and is the same world as
https://mangadex.org/title/fa66c641...agnet-now-my-crush-feels-bad-for-rejecting-me
The novel company is publishing that novel/manga MC works from that other story, and is weird to see what happens after this MC leaves it as in that manga it seemed to be a good company, seeing its corruption in this other work from the same author is pretty weird, hope it untwist itself.

I read a couple chapters and the excessive pantyshot is bugging me.

 

[lovolo]

NTR and a setup to a hentai. Oh this will be fun to read

I swear I read a hentai like this before. His wife is cheating, and their daughter is not his, the cheating partner is some aspiring musician and then he finds a runaway JK. I forgot the name though.

 

[VooXoo]

I read a couple chapters and the excessive pantyshot is bugging me.

Yes, that manga have way too many pantyshots, it annoyes me too because they are not casual and rare but pushed on the reader the whole time, is too much.
I'm reading it too and that MC should

Spoiler

abandon the novel publisher even there as the son of the CEO attempted to rape his childhood friend, if really the same world and doesn't simply have some things in common is likely that was the real trigger that made MC leave the company, as after all he had a good editor and his works didn't need external output and the serie was well estabilished, only a idiot would put a new guy with problems on the best selling serie of the company, novelist ftaher worked in the company too so I'm guessing that after hearing what happened he made so to leave the place in the most devasting way possible.
Novelists, first time novelist mostly, get normally screwed by contracts, not knowing the details, but with his father to introduce him I imagine that MC had the best contract possible, just got to the attempted rape part so I'm guessing the flow.

About that hentai, I know it too, forgot the title, it just lacked a explanation about MC separation because I really hope he sued the bitch, the daughter wasn't innocent, just a kid but knew the truth, MC found out by chance by seeing them together in a crows and hearing them talk.

Dark gathering have a chapter with a simialr situation, but no JK to save MC and he lost his "family" when the not-daughter was all grown up, in the same way he was used when the real father had a succesfull life without "burdens", it end nicely though

Spoiler

with the ruined man killing absolutely everyone at the not-daughter wedding

.

 

[lovolo]

Yes, that manga have way too many pantyshots, it annoyes me too because they are not casual and rare but pushed on the reader the whole time, is too much.
I'm reading it too and that MC should

Spoiler

abandon the novel publisher even there as the son of the CEO attempted to rape his childhood friend, if really the same world and doesn't simply have some things in common is likely that was the real trigger that made MC leave the company, as after all he had a good editor and his works didn't need external output and the serie was well estabilished, only a idiot would put a new guy with problems on the best selling serie of the company, novelist ftaher worked in the company too so I'm guessing that after hearing what happened he made so to leave the place in the most devasting way possible.
Novelists, first time novelist mostly, get normally screwed by contracts, not knowing the details, but with his father to introduce him I imagine that MC had the best contract possible, just got to the attempted rape part so I'm guessing the flow.

About that hentai, I know it too, forgot the title, it just lacked a explanation about MC separation because I really hope he sued the bitch, the daughter wasn't innocent, just a kid but knew the truth, MC found out by chance by seeing them together in a crows and hearing them talk.

Dark gathering have a chapter with a simialr situation, but no JK to save MC and he lost his "family" when the not-daughter was all grown up, in the same way he was used when the real father had a succesfull life without "burdens", it end nicely though

Spoiler

with the ruined man killing absolutely everyone at the not-daughter wedding

.

Yeah I dropped that one because it feels cringe somehow? I read up until he went to the hotel and meet the singer and VA girl so dunno about the CEO son arc. Did that end up a harem? There are childhood friend, the girl editor, the singer and VA girl or did I miss someone?

Yeah I just remember bits because it's been so long. I hope someone knows the name. Usually you remember hentai if they're stand out in some way. Forget the name but still remember the plot. I think it's kinda happy ending where he meet the JK again?

I don't read Dark Gathering but I know that chapter. I just especially read that chapter because someone spoil it and I got curious.

 

[VooXoo]

Yeah I dropped that one because it feels cringe somehow? I read up until he went to the hotel and meet the singer and VA girl so dunno about the CEO son arc. Did that end up a harem? There are childhood friend, the girl editor, the singer and VA girl or did I miss someone?

Yeah I just remember bits because it's been so long. I hope someone knows the name. Usually you remember hentai if they're stand out in some way. Forget the name but still remember the plot. I think it's kinda happy ending where he meet the JK again?

I don't read Dark Gathering but I know that chapter. I just especially read that chapter because someone spoil it and I got curious.

Same on Dark gathering, i put it in the back burner but the anti-NTR chapter is very popular and I jumped to it.

For the hentai, they don't simply meet again, I don't remember it 100% but it was showed that MC was living in a different apartment and he was frequenting the JK, most likely still couldn't live together.
The different home is 100% because he divorced and of course wouldn't live in a family house full of fake memories, I just hope he had the balls to sue them, by law he could ruin the bastards, they took years of his life, years he could have used livign his youth or finding someone that liked him, sure things worked out with the JK at the end, but that was just a lucky coincidence, together with finding out by chance he was lied about on the child, because he wouldn't have started anything with the JK if he thought his family was real and just troubled.

 

[ItsThatBriGuy]

MC should have bitch slam the cheating wife.

This is an Ibarakino joint. The narrative will save him the trouble.