Madoromi Barmaid - Vol. 7 Ch. 38 - Storm

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Finally we can move on. Not that this was a bad arc, just really started to drag on.
 
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Ahaha, I can't lie, I really adore this finish. As a performer, that's exactly right! BELIEVE YOU'RE THE BEST!
 
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Her mistake is kinda a downer on the flow... but it seems strangely appropriate for Hiyoko; she did so much already, and just her landing that jump was already impressive enough.

This arc was interesting in a few ways. I feel that if I could have read it in one go, the flow would have been better, but because of that, I reflect on a few writing devices I ignored previously.
 

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