Magic Level 99990000 All-Attribute Great Sage - Ch. 3

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Ok this series up to chapter 7 ticks all my boxes for Bad Writing 101.

The bullies multiple times do things that would kill anyone else but the MC and infact 3 yes 3 times attempt to kill the MC. The MC each 3 times lets them off with a slap on the wrist or less.

The MC keeps insisting on not standing out then his actions infront of others contradicts this, his abilities at detection are like the entire city but then suddenly he doesn't notice a freaking mage recording him.

We have the ol "Bully likes FMC but acts in a totally disgusting and super obvious way and is shock pikachu'd face that she doesn't think of him romantically and is actually disgusted by him so it must be all the bully victims fault she hates him".

We have the classic no-one seems to be monitoring classes at all cause we have bullies casting flashy spells to kill/maim MC and yet somehow no-one at the school knows? We also have the fact that Bully thinks he can claim it was an accident to kill MC when FMC is right there and can say otherwise......... This is all incredibly stupid writing. Giving this junk 1/10
 
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Ok this series up to chapter 7 ticks all my boxes for Bad Writing 101.

The bullies multiple times do things that would kill anyone else but the MC and infact 3 yes 3 times attempt to kill the MC. The MC each 3 times lets them off with a slap on the wrist or less.

The MC keeps insisting on not standing out then his actions infront of others contradicts this, his abilities at detection are like the entire city but then suddenly he doesn't notice a freaking mage recording him.

We have the ol "Bully likes FMC but acts in a totally disgusting and super obvious way and is shock pikachu'd face that she doesn't think of him romantically and is actually disgusted by him so it must be all the bully victims fault she hates him".

We have the classic no-one seems to be monitoring classes at all cause we have bullies casting flashy spells to kill/maim MC and yet somehow no-one at the school knows? We also have the fact that Bully thinks he can claim it was an accident to kill MC when FMC is right there and can say otherwise......... This is all incredibly stupid writing. Giving this junk 1/10
Pretty much confirmed what the last 4 chapters were hinting at for me. Thanks for saving me some time.
 
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Pretty much confirmed what the last 4 chapters were hinting at for me. Thanks for saving me some time.
Oh it got so much worse, like the power of friendship, bullies still doing stupid stuff even after expulsion, doing insanely obvious stuff and still trying to hide his real identity and abusive family members being forgiven for lifetime abuse because ahhh reasons.
 
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Oh it got so much worse, like the power of friendship, bullies still doing stupid stuff even after expulsion, doing insanely obvious stuff and still trying to hide his real identity and abusive family members being forgiven for lifetime abuse because ahhh reasons.
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doesn't want to stand out

DECIDED TO NOT HOLD BACK KNOWING DAMN WELL HE'LL STAND OUT MORE THAN JESUS AT A FURY CONVENTION!!!!!!!!!!

this shit is really starting to piss me off
 

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