Ok this series up to chapter 7 ticks all my boxes for Bad Writing 101.
The bullies multiple times do things that would kill anyone else but the MC and infact 3 yes 3 times attempt to kill the MC. The MC each 3 times lets them off with a slap on the wrist or less.
The MC keeps insisting on not standing out then his actions infront of others contradicts this, his abilities at detection are like the entire city but then suddenly he doesn't notice a freaking mage recording him.
We have the ol "Bully likes FMC but acts in a totally disgusting and super obvious way and is shock pikachu'd face that she doesn't think of him romantically and is actually disgusted by him so it must be all the bully victims fault she hates him".
We have the classic no-one seems to be monitoring classes at all cause we have bullies casting flashy spells to kill/maim MC and yet somehow no-one at the school knows? We also have the fact that Bully thinks he can claim it was an accident to kill MC when FMC is right there and can say otherwise......... This is all incredibly stupid writing. Giving this junk 1/10