Maguro-Shoujo - Vol. 3 Ch. 13 - The girl who's idled

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Page 12: So this is what the extreme idleness has been taken to --> So this is the extreme idleness has been taken to
Page 13: Oktya's and Hibiki's bubbles are swapped
Page 15: I'm going to get change! --> I'm going to get changed!
Last page: The shade and wind makes it cool --> The shade and wind make it cool
 
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Page 12: So this is what the extreme idleness has been taken to --> So this is the extreme idleness has been taken to
Page 13: Oktya's and Hibiki's bubbles are swapped
Page 15: I'm going to get change! --> I'm going to get changed!
Last page: The shade and wind makes it cool --> The shade and wind make it cool
Thanks for the corrections. Maybe it's just me being an esl but the first line seem ungrammatical, that's why I tried to change it.
 

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