Mahjong Hiryuu Densetsu Tenpai - Vol. 1 Ch. 7 - Tensan Mahjong Parlor

[MangaDex]

 

[tomato-kun]

Thank you so much again for your hard work, Makoto-san!

Just wanted to add some corrections, if it's not too annoying. #1: when you wrote "agari-dome", I'm pretty sure it should be "agari-yame", it's a well-known mahjong rule and I've never heard it called agari-dome. But if there is furigana saying that it should be read that way, then it's my mistake. #2: When Shun is looking for the oolong tea, the correct English is "I can't find it" instead of "I don't find it"

I'd be down to proofread your chapters, if you would like that. I'm a native English speaker and I know mahjong terminology quite well.

 

[Makoto912]

Ohh

Thank you so much again for your hard work, Makoto-san!

Just wanted to add some corrections, if it's not too annoying. #1: when you wrote "agari-dome", I'm pretty sure it should be "agari-yame", it's a well-known mahjong rule and I've never heard it called agari-dome. But if there is furigana saying that it should be read that way, then it's my mistake. #2: When Shun is looking for the oolong tea, the correct English is "I can't find it" instead of "I don't find it"

I'd be down to proofread your chapters, if you would like that. I'm a native English speaker and I know mahjong terminology quite well.

Oh, thanks for correcting me lol, didn‘t even realize. Well I’m not THAT deep in mahjong terminology but I guess I just need to look up those words haha.

If you really wanna help proofreading, I’d be down.

 

[tomato-kun]

Ohh

Oh, thanks for correcting me lol, didn‘t even realize. Well I’m not THAT deep in mahjong terminology but I guess I just need to look up those words haha.

If you really wanna help proofreading, I’d be down.

Yeah, sure. My discord is tomato8014, if you want to reach me there, or whichever way is easiest for you.

 

[Makoto912]

Thank you so much again for your hard work, Makoto-san!

Just wanted to add some corrections, if it's not too annoying. #1: when you wrote "agari-dome", I'm pretty sure it should be "agari-yame", it's a well-known mahjong rule and I've never heard it called agari-dome. But if there is furigana saying that it should be read that way, then it's my mistake. #2: When Shun is looking for the oolong tea, the correct English is "I can't find it" instead of "I don't find it"

I'd be down to proofread your chapters, if you would like that. I'm a native English speaker and I know mahjong terminology quite well.

Oh btw, I’m not even sure if will continue this, i just lowkey don‘t know what to translate 💀😂. I just had Tenpai as a project for the meanwhile