Looks interesting enough. The idea of witchcraft controlling sin powers is a nice twist. Using “sloth” to stop fire is ingenious, an I’m curious to see glee this Erik use sin powers in creative ways. Excited to see where it goes. I wonder what sin powers he uses that made Cecilia feel like she’s in his debt…
If tomorrow is the exam, travel takes 3, and they got the letter 2 ago... then even if they left when they got the letter, they would be too late to enroll.
Looks interesting enough. The idea of witchcraft controlling sin powers is a nice twist. Using “sloth” to stop fire is ingenious, an I’m curious to see glee this Erik use sin powers in creative ways. Excited to see where it goes. I wonder what sin powers he uses that made Cecilia feel like she’s in his debt…
If tomorrow is the exam, travel takes 3, and they got the letter 2 ago... then even if they left when they got the letter, they would be too late to enroll.
Unless the scan group edited it, they said it was the other way around, the letter came 3 months ago and it takes 2 to get there. So MC would've been fine if the dad mentioned it earlier.
Feel like they started in a weird place feels hard to get invested maybe because they are doing exposition rather than showing the backstory of discrimination and gaining his power also I fucking hate flashbacks and showing the future in the first chapters as a lazy hook only yo then go back into the past making any character seen in the future essentially immortal.
I don’t know why but this feels very bad maybe I’m sleep deprived but this kinda feels like trash trash