Mahou Shoujo Madoka★Magica - Akemi Homura ga Tenkou Shitara Kaname Madoka ga Shindeita Hanashi (Doujinshi) - Oneshot

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[BakedBanana]

Wow, that was REALLY good. ;-;

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"And if it's to protect them, then I... will no longer any resentment for the sacrifices I am bidden to make" (Page 78)

Looks like there's a word missing between 'longer' and 'any', probably should be 'hold'?

"So the idea of, 'What happens if Madoka was already to be begin with?'" (Page 81)

Missing the word 'dead' between 'already' and 'to'.