hiii sorry this is my first comment ever, but i just wanted to say that your translations are really easy to read and the translators notes always get a little kick out of me :3 !
I'm right there with you on the notes on page two. Never really did like seeing that in clearly non-Japanese settings.
And this is pretty much the life of most online artists that take commissions. "You want to see your OC getting railed? That's $200 if you want full color and shading."
Just binged chapters 1-7 of your translations and wow. You do great work. Honestly, I'd rather wait and read your versions if you continue than catch up with the other one. Hope you keep it up!