Mahoutsukai no Konyakusha - Vol. 1 Ch. 1.1

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the idea has potential, but this first chapter is waaay too rushed and short
 
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its better if u put chapter 1- part 1, becouse chapter 1 have 4 part in raw
 
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I hope this chapter is only a prologue and that the next ones are longer or it will be exasperating to follow.
 
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The god that did this is a monster. Imagine your grandfather has lots of money and promises it to you when he dies. After his death, you find out he gave it to the man he wants you to marry. Fuck that nonsense. Still going to read it because I'm weak, but I hope that god gets some payback.
 
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