The added facial hair on the ML really makes me remember that she’s meant to be, what, fifteen, i think? No one’s forcing you to be historically accurate at this point, bud....don’t try to justify it as her being 18 in her previous life, literally what is the reason she couldn’t be 18 (at LEAST) in this one? I know I’m prob echoing comments before me, but if EVRYONE is commenting on it, I’m pretty sure that means something.
It’s beautifully done, tho, rest assured I’ll prob keep reading until I can’t excuse the romantic elements lmao