@sondz1911 here are a few i spotted
page 2 -"I have called him here all of the sudden'' - seems strange given the first half of the sentence, i dont know the raw so i cant comment on the correction
''this reading session'' -> should be ''a reading session''
page 9 - '' I always sensed something was near'' -> maybe should be ''someone''?
page 12 - ''sensei'' -> typo? or was it actually sensei?
page 13 - ''no need to be active'' -> i cant be sure but maybe ''no need to be proactive/on the offensive''
''if the boys smiled at me'' ->''if boys smile at me'' unless she is specifically mentioning the class
many of these might not be grammar but more just how it sounded when read, just felt that bit off