@overunderthrust typos
Pg 2:
amazing ->
Amazing
Pg 3: And
its with your help -> And
it's with your help
Pg 4a:
through out the country ->
throughout the country
Pg 4b: An
Island nation -> An
island nation
Pg 6:
Sien-san ->
Shien-san
Pg 13: on her left
brest -> on her left
breast
Pg 17: popular
now a days -> popular
nowadays
Pg 19: a lot
happen to me
to -> a lot
happened to me
too
Pg 24a: how
are relationship was -> how
our relationship was
Pg 24b: Was...
It really like this? -> Was...
it really like this?
Pg 28: But your skills as a witch
is so good -> But your skills as a witch
are so good
Pg 30: Yes,
Let's do this -> Yes,
let's do this
@overunderthrust If you guys are going to make these edits, I'd also suggest changing country/nation to kingdom or something since they didn't have those concepts back in 16th century Europe.
Also on p.18, the spell she chants is chinchin (penis) not the normal chichin. Suggesting "penis wenis go away" or something like that.
Other mistakes I've spotted:
P.3 "Seems that half of her friends have been burned at the stake" should be "Many (a majority) of our friends/colleagues/ us witches...", and "What kind of place would like to live" should be "What kind of place would you like to live in?"
P.7 "I've finally found them" should be "I've finally found it" (the apartment), and "But I was able to stay in one piece" should be something like "But I've managed to locate her".