Mamono no Mori no Shojo Nova - Ch. 1

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The "I can't do" on page 20 makes no sense and on page 25 "I have you Ber!" is clearly supposed to be "I HATE you Ber!".

Other than that there are no real errors though I think "Strass" should've been "Strix", though that may just be a choice by the author.
 

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