Maou-jou de Oyasumi - Ch. 211 - They're the Sorrows of a Perceptive Bird!

[nutman451]

@Mothflower
No problem bud. As a fellow text wall enthusiast myself I love it when people share their thoughts and analysis of a series. Though I'll be honest the way you structure it can be very difficult to read. If I were to give constructive criticism, it'd be better if you try to give space for each paragraph and make sure a paragraph revolves around 1 point. When you want to shift to another point then it's best to create a new paragraph. That way reading and quoting your points would be much easier. Your analysis and attention to detail is magnificent (small details such as why Aji and Sandra didn't rescue Zetsuran is honestly great) but it's buried under a messy writing style that likes to veer towards other topics which threatens to make your post seem unfocused. You got talent, just need to polish on how to deliver.

Suya didn't care the first time she heard it which was in chapter 134 since she was too worried about not being able to sleep because she drank that potion.

Oh I completely forgot about this chapter. Truth be told I havent bothered myself in re-reading this whole series. My comment was simply an inside joke on my part where a friend and I was discussing whether Suya cared for Nudist or not, to the point where we (in my opinion) were going in circles.

I guess you're right about Sandra's situation. We'll have to see how it develops I guess.

To be honest I just want more Zetsuran chapters. Females in this series are fewer compared to the males and most of them are cute and hilarious.

There should be another Zetsuran chapter soon.

There better be. Author just teased us with Zetsuran Idol, and there's gonna be hell to pay if he/she doesn't deliver.

 

[SirLOBSter]

YAY finally we get a few more. Shame that there is a lack of editors for this, but every release is always appreciated, keep up the good work!

@Kisato I think Oxe would still get (a bit, maybe) mad at 1. the person that stole his mana 2. the fact the princess has that grimoire (I mean, he has to have some knowledge about it and how dangerous it is, and it was supposedly guarded by Twilight in the library, ); but yeah, being the princess, it would end up like you say.

 

[imjustamangareader]

Cursed Musician is a Legend at keeping secrets.