Dex-chan lover
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awww this chapter iz a adorable
Have you read that story Tou no Kanri o Shite Miyou? I quite like how the harem is set up in that one. All of the girls all have their own roles and get to do different things.I think you can stop there. When it gets to just collecting waifus it gets bland. It's much better to show actual development and reasoning behind the relationships.
So when it comes to harems, "limited" harems where it's three or four characters involved and don't expand later on work better. Those also tend to have the characters, like here, introduced long before they become part of the harem, and they tend to be more involved in the plot, compared to the ones living in the pokeball only to come out when needed for some plot device.
If only people stopped with localization.And here we see yet another reason to not localize "onii-san" as "big bro" or any such variants, because the cultural context of modern Japanese etiquette does not match with English.
Well, it doesn't feel like a harem in the sense of others. Its like a familial gathering but Yuki and Lefi are actual husband and wife like.Generally I don't like harems, but this was honestly well done.
What a lovely way to grow your harem.