Maou ni Natta node, Dungeon Tsukutte Jingai Musume to Honobono suru - Vol. 4 Ch. 23.1

[Kazouie]

The city major really should give them a properly briefed honor guard that keeps trouble away while they're in the city.

 

[sodah]

Nell

Spoiler

second best waifu

 

[Morsealworth]

The shape of spaghetti on pg. 12 is extremely creative

@aigomorla And that's why she needs someone to stop her from doing that

 

[JuliusCV]

Ah, the curse of fragmented chapters has reached this place too. Such a dreadful time to live, where you cant even enjoy a full chapter at time.

Thanks for the chapter, nonetheless! Good to see this series hasn't been dropped.

 

[redpandamaniacal]

@seekermoc
Judging by the credits, the proofreader seems to be different. The redrawer also changed, although that should be unrelated. Looking back, the proofreader changing isn't unusual, but the quality this time certainly makes is seem like there's a significant skill gap with this change. It does give me an appreciation for the work that proofreaders did in earlier chapters though, considering the translater's stayed the same.

I think I'll shelve this chapter for now and hope it gets released with fixes later.

 

[MarqFJA87]

@seekermoc & @redpandamaniacal: That's what happens when you don't have a quality checker, as the credits at the beginning point out (the relevant spot has no name to it).

@starburst98: There is a proofreader listed. What's missing is a quality checker, whose job is the next step after proofreading.

@feha: It's only part of a chapter; that's why it's "23.1" rather than just "23".

 

[seekermoc]

@MarqFJA87

Yeah, lack of QC is a problem, but they still listed a proofreader. There's no way a proficient English speaker proofread this. The QC is there to catch any small mistakes the PR (and CL/RD/TS) missed, not to re-PR everything because the primary PR didn't do their job...

 

[redpandamaniacal]

@ MarqFJA87
Yeah, although last chapter doesn't have QC either with the main difference being the proofreader change.

 

[attinat]

notlikethis

 

[MarqFJA87]

@seekermoc: That's a perfectly valid point, but consider the possibility of how bad the translation could have been if there was no proofreader at all.

 

[Izaya_Onisai]

Spoiler

Hero-chan calls him Onii-san not mister... times like these make me think the translator is using mtl...

 

[dextersTomato]

"I've save your wallets..."
LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hahahahaha

 

[ForTheJerusalem]

Lefi 😭

 

[Gnostalgia]

So when he said "He had to save them" last chapter, he was talking about the guys lmao