Maou no Ore ga Dorei Elf wo Yome ni Shitanda ga, Dou Medereba ii? - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - First Love with a Communication Disorder Is like Mouldy Bread

[saeka]

holding hand in chapter 2? That's too lewd, too fast. I rate this 6/9

 

[Rel_]

EWWWWW HOLDING HANDS!?!?!? IT'S TOO LEWD

 

[ryouhira]

@newmangareader246 @Hitspark, our MC isn't the type to have lot money in first place, while other evil mages did lot bad deeds(which is a way to make money), he just chill out and avoid contact with outside world.
and his backstory is poor bandit, clearly doesn't heard like money to me

 

[Hitspark]

@ryouhira Would you mind repeating this in english?

 

[WhywasIBorn]

He's broke because of Simping.

 

[SupremeDoc]

@Hitspark
That is english... he might not be a native speaker but i still understood enough to get what he is saying. No need to be an ass

 

[Hitspark]

@SupremeDoc If I have to re-read your statement several times over to get the basic gist of what you're saying, you've either written improperly or my reading comprehension is not up to par. I did not understand him when I first read it, it took several tries and I'm not going to pretend what he wrote was perfectly reasonable english that I should have immediately understood or that it took no effort to make sense of it. Native speaker or not, bad english is bad english. While I applaud his efforts in learning the language so far, I'm not his mother and I don't need to coddle his efforts. So I asked a simple question, would he like to try that again in english, meaning proper english.

I don't see the point in sugar coating something like that. In comparison to all the things I COULD have said, that one is relatively tame and nothing to get your panties in a bunch over. I doubt it killed him or even cut his pinky and, while I certainly hope it did not cause him any emotional distress, it's a small but pointed criticism and I don't doubt he could handle it. In fact, I'm certain he can and I'm certain he can do better because it is a far cry from the other attempts at english I've seen (even from native speakers).

That being said, here is my card:

Spoiler

Enjoy your day.

 

[Hitspark]

@ryouhira Apologies, if I did hurt your feelings by the way.

 

[ryouhira]

The only thing that hurt me is the fact you mention me, thus make me looking a giant wall of text you make before mentioning me.(it's make me uncomfortable)

i not really mind when you told me to repeat it, i planned to use google translate to do it but that is so much pain in ass.

 

[Hitspark]

@ryouhira I apologize for that, I tend to be very wordy sometimes.

 

[Raven_Shadow]

😫Literally giving it all for a woman (female elf). 😓

 

[Oddballr]

Yo this dude is fuckin funny.

 

[Esor]

@Oddballr as much as the chapter title

 

[SupremeDoc]

@Hitspark
Cool

 

[xXx_EpicProGamerVsSociety_xXx]

this guy is so funny

 

[bot1995]

I love it has comedy elements added to it😆

 

[Xrious]

Bro got holding hands alr in 2 chapters? Talk about the progression LMAO

 

[Szaal]

The bard gets the dragon.
The paladin gets the goddess.
The warrior gets the elf twink.

And me? I get POWERFUL!
Haha ha!

 

[LakeFreeter]

i fkn hate that line especially in this case "you can see loneliness in his eyes"... like bulsht. Stop reading your teen novels.

 

[thycondrius]

Swing and a miss