There is an extra word in one bubble on page 7, the following is the corrected text. page 7, "After all zhang yi is the son of the marquis zhang, he must have been careless otherwise he would not have lost." Since im commenting about it, the bubble to the right of it can be written to flow a bit better while keeping the same speech pattern -> "In my opinion, simon may be able to compete with joseph in a few years" or a complete rewrite with the same meaning if you want, but it sounds much different -> "In a few years i think simon may be able to compete with joseph"